Thursday, March 13, 2014
Things
Just looking at my brother can make him laugh
Just staring at an audience can make them clap
Don't really know how I'm feeling until I sing
Reality caves in on me when I think
Nothing else matters when I eat
Everything seems so important before I sleep
After the best day I sleep-
peacefully, In my dreams I laugh
In my dreams I can't forget the food I eat
Can't wait for graduation, my whole family will clap
Life is always beautiful, is how they think
My dad will set up karaoke to make everyone sing
My dad is bad at it, but there's always a reason to sing
There's alway's another day, I wait until tommorow through sleep
Don't count your thoughts worthless, always think
But don't lose your sense of wonder, that's why we laugh
In middle school my teacher taught us how to clap
I took a class in elementary school to teach me how to eat
Manners Matter. We learned etiquette, we went to Durangos to eat
If it was my birthday they would sing-
and cheer for my new age, make joyous sounds and clap
and they'd remember the joy they gave in their sleep
Me and my dad watch comedy shows to laugh
I was actually on one now that I think
I don't judge how other people think
But I always judge how other people eat
Because how they eat is probably how they laugh
And how they laugh is probably how they sing
Viscous songs, looking forward to sleep
Lord, give me a reason to clap
At other people's misfortune, some poeple clap
Poisonous hateful thoughts about others is how some think
Some don't get stuff done, in their bed for 18 hours they sleep
Shoveling food in their mouth, barely tasting it some eat
Screaming, praising the devil's strength is how some sing
And at others, to feel dominant some laugh
If you laugh at others I will think,
That you don't clap when believers of God sing
Sin can be aparent in just the way someone eats, don't want to regret it when death takes over sleep.
Originally I picked out six words to end my poem with that were basic actions that people do on a semi-regular basis. These actions are the basic foundations of being human, and are what makes the human experience enjoyable. Looking back I didn't have a main theme evident throughout my poem. It seemed that I just had description. So I thought about what I wanted to say and decided that I wanted to make clear that these actions can be inappropriate or sinful in a certain context. I added words like "sin" and "devil" in this poem so that I could make it clear the evil impact these actions could have if done in vain.
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